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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2008-04-05 08:46 AM

I tried to ignore you today,
but you understand thorns,
and claimed advantage
over my soft spots.
Will tomorrow
be different?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-04-05 10:26 AM

Wonderful writing, Ms Midnitesun~
I adore these thoughts of yours.
Yes, those thorns are reminders of something beautiful.

Love your title too.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-04-05 10:31 AM

Oh, dear Kacy!

Your laser sharp words just touched me profoundly! A refined rendering of a deep thought.

Still we continue to trust tomorrow.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-04-05 11:05 AM

Very clever write, Kacy.
Ida

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-04-05 11:14 AM

i guess if the graceful rose must endore a thorn or two sometimes, we can too, cant we?

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-04-05 03:19 PM

beautiful. It can be read in many different ways. oh, this will be in my mind for today.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2008-04-05 03:29 PM

You're quite welcome. Not sure which one you read, but if it inspired this, then I'm very pleased.

And I understand.

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

7 posted 2008-04-05 04:28 PM

Ouch. Very effective writing!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2008-04-05 05:04 PM

hi Kacy...I hope each thorn you feel will remind you of how very tender your heart is. Sometimes that can be a good thing.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2008-04-06 05:16 AM

Hi Midnitesun
I agree with seoulair, your poem can be read in different ways...
Always a pleasure to read you...

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-04-06 06:08 AM

Kacy.. I like this from start to finish.. and understand .... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2008-04-06 11:54 AM

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

12 posted 2008-04-08 09:52 PM

I like this a lot - lots.

Alison

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