The Beauty of the Universe.

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #42

The Beauty of the Universe.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-04-06 10:02 PM

The remarkable beauty of the ultimate space,
So peaceful with incredible pictures of art all over the place,
The sky painted a shadow black with white droplets on top,
While the sun keeps our solar system going and it never stops.
With the melody of a cricket whispering through the vacuum of space,
I start to listen to meditation music, giving the outside world a taste,
Of relaxing music that sounds like an orchestra of angels.
The notes sound so real, they are almost tangible.
Seeing millions and millions of stars and planets floating and orbiting in unison,
A remarkable creation, a gift from God he has given.
The universe is the most amazing thing us humans know,
Sooner or later we will be able to go,
Into space and see the beauty God has created
And I feel that I am obligated,
To explain in depth and in coherent words,
How the universe is so beautiful, like a new born bird.

As I take you on an adventure,
To see the universe in full color,
I want you to bring a open mind so you can capture,
The beauty of Earth's gigantic brother.
Just open your mind and visualize these pictures,
That I am painting with the strokes of my pen,
These words are the building blocks to a sculpture,
And you have to put it together again.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-07 12:51 PM

beautiful poem. enjoyed the view.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-04-07 05:23 PM

Your awe is perceived and this is a beautiful write. The infinity of Universe is mind boggling.

Thank you for this.

Love,
Margherita

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-07 05:31 PM

This is a beautiful piece…

Thank you for sharing it.

Tammy<333

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

4 posted 2008-04-07 05:31 PM

You are very welcome! Thank you for your fantastic comments, made my day! :-)

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.