Open Poetry #42 |
Rainbow Cow Smiling poem |
PurplePenButterfly Member
since 2008-03-06
Posts 65Canada |
Rainbow Cow Smiling.... One day upon a barnyard In a timewarp far away There in the pasture of weirdness This creature did lay Coloured in assortment of hues Varying from intense to pastel I tell you it stood out from others Oh yes Quite well Mooing and gnawing at grass so lush No hurrying this one Not intending to rush At night when the moon Celestrial and full There stands this animal Content in its own peace And that's no bull Dawn comes around and the sun is a rising Why of course in the centre of it all You guessed it Rainbow Cow smiling... © PurplePenButterfly~2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Jacki.. this brought a lovely smile thank you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I cannot explain to you why this poem brought tears to my eyes because it would make no sense to anyone other than me, but I will tell you, that for me your Rainbow Cow Smiling, with its incredible beauty and uniqueness, is so very, very special and it reminds me of someone who is just the same… I cannot begin to thank you enough for writing and sharing this incredible piece… Tammy<333 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
lovely. love the read. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Great writing, enjoyed a lot. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
PurplePenButterfly, Nice work kid. A smiling cow is a happy cow--gives contented milk. Drink more milk. Bobby |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm smiling because it seems as if the 60's came alive again when I didn't get to do anything but listen to others talking about rainbows. This was very good... and quite meaningful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hear mellow moos and see this whimsical creature munching contentedly on a sea of vibrant green grass. An enjoyable read! |
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