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Larry Brown
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Larry Brown |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Larry Brown Sun brushed, pecan swirls twisting above peridot portals. Bunyan’s blue blended with a teddy. Magnanimous smile intense enough to melt precious metals. Traveling through other’s despair to heal their beat. That was the gift God gave. Voluminous tears desiccated, sadness forced to retreat. Seeing beyond faux expressions, reaching into core cellars. An aged soul in a youthful vessel. Elevating, supporting, transforming foundations into pillars. Alas, breathing in too few of the Earth’s flavors. Seasons, just not enough given. Carving fresh paths out of blurred visions? Never meant to journey that far. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tammy~ This is a very touching render~ 'An aged soul in a youthful vessel.' That tells me so much about Larry~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many great lines in your poem, one I shall read over more than a few times. I especially liked the thought of carving new paths through blurred visions. Sheesh, aint it the truth though. Really nice to read you, and ~welcome~ |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Hi Marge and Blues, Thank you so very much for the kind words and warm welcomes… Both are greatly appreciated.  Tammy<333 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful read. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Thank you much Seoulair. Tammy<333 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Tammy, enjoyed the soul of your pen... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome to the sight, Tammy Enjoyed this post. Ida |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But the love is still there, and nothing will ever replace that. Not even such a loss. Again, Tammy, welcome to Passions. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Dark, Ida, and Sunshine, Thank you so much for the welcomes and the kind words. They are much appreciated. Tammy<333 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Tammy, your poem touches the heart and makes me want to reach out with a big hug. Beautifully written! I have visited your site and watched the video. Yes your Larry was a beautiful sunshine boy, he dances in your heart now. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Thank you so very much Margherita, You have brought tears to my eyes with your beautiful words of Larry and for taking the precious time to meat him… Thank you so very, very much… Tammy<333 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
sending some very special  hugs your way Tammy... lovely gifting here for your precious Larry... love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Thank you so much RDW for the kind words on my write and I need as many hugs as I can get… Tammy<333 |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tammy<333, Your words are gentle and loving - my heart goes out to you. You write beautiful words for your beautiful boy. Thinking of you, Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...and I can share a hug...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tammy...I've just watched your, I Miss You Larry video, twice. Thank you for sharing its treasure of love. You have a wonderful talent for words born from this....I'll bet he's pleased to know that. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Tammy, I have seen the video & it is a fine touching tribute to your lovely son. There is so much I wish I could say but nothing that will help or alter the pain I am sure you must feel. His spirit will continue to soar & he will never be forgotten as long as you have a breath in your body. I would be devastated were that my child and I can only offer you my deepest sympathy. Sorry really does not cut it...it just makes me feel so helpless I applaud your courage for posting the video I personally do not think I would have the strength to do so if I were in your position. God bless you and your other son & husband... John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Larrysmom, Nice kid. I'm sorry for your loss. Hang in there Hon. Good poem. Bobby |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Alison, Thank you for the kind words on my writing and for the compassion you show… It means the world and helps more than you could know. James, Thank you so much. I am learning to write and I will take all the hugs I can get to help me on my way…Martie, Thank you for giving of your time to watch the video and meet Larry. This gives me hope, for as long as people continue to see his face, know his name, and learn just a little of his short but giving life, I know he will never truly be gone. Of course you know this as well as I do. I can only hope that my words will grow, in time, to carry just a fraction of the beauty my son did and always will… Thank you also for sharing with me your beautiful Michelle, I hope Larry has met her because I know that if so, she has put many smiles on his face. Dear John, No, you cannot alter the pain, however you truly have helped… You gave of your time to meet and know of Larry and like you said, “His spirit will continue to soar and he will never be forgotten” not as long as such wonderful people as yourself and the ones I have met here on pip are on this Earth to help me keep Larry’s memory alive. You thought you were helpless but in fact you were not and you did do something about it… From the bottom of my heart, I thank you… Bobby, Thank you so very much… I will hang in there. I have no choice. Larry expects it of me and his little brother needs it… Tammy<333 |
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