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Open Poetry #42

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-04-04 08:54 PM

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Long muzzles
Looking over
Barbed wire

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-04-04 09:16 PM

John,

This is very descriptive. It's good work.

Bobby

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-04-04 09:59 PM

A clean example of "less is more". Lots of impact in this short poem, John.

A

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-04 11:07 PM

for war?

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