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Open Poetry #42

a nervous bee

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-04-04 04:45 PM

I saw a nervous bee
knocking at my window,
and I thought to myself
what a fantastic world
we live in,
she is alive as I am
and does a better job,
She makes a work more useful
than many people.

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2008-04-04 04:49 PM

I have a certain fascination with bees, they have complex behaviors that we are just beginning to fathom. Your poem is a fine tribute to them.

Art

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-04-04 04:52 PM

How true this is...they drone on and all.

Nature does, overall, give us much to observe,
and to aspire to, for if we were to do
as much as any animal, bird or insect,

the world might be a better place.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-04 04:56 PM

very lovely. The bee must wanted to visit a sweet character.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-04-04 08:19 PM

lovely descriptive writing Yann..

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-04-05 01:39 AM

I enjoy your keen powers of obsevation, yann.
Nature was indeed very wise and generous for giving us the gift of bees.
Ida

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2008-04-07 02:57 PM

You know those kind of people to do ya? Or those kind of BEES!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

7 posted 2008-04-07 03:49 PM

This is lovely and true…

Tammy<333

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