Open Poetry #42 |
a nervous bee |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I saw a nervous bee knocking at my window, and I thought to myself what a fantastic world we live in, she is alive as I am and does a better job, She makes a work more useful than many people. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I have a certain fascination with bees, they have complex behaviors that we are just beginning to fathom. Your poem is a fine tribute to them. Art |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How true this is...they drone on and all. Nature does, overall, give us much to observe, and to aspire to, for if we were to do as much as any animal, bird or insect, the world might be a better place. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very lovely. The bee must wanted to visit a sweet character. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely descriptive writing Yann.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I enjoy your keen powers of obsevation, yann. Nature was indeed very wise and generous for giving us the gift of bees. Ida |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
You know those kind of people to do ya? Or those kind of BEES!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is lovely and true… Tammy<333 |
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