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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-04-04 10:53 AM

They loom at the gravesite
no longer disheveled,
just thick in sobriety
this morning, hungover

rain bleeds intermittently
through the frost
on their branches

one breath away
lavendar stalls
centerstage,
in remission

starless
in moonshadow,
the Lady is April

on the entrance
from dormancy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-04-04 11:14 AM

SweetInkyOne~
This is Spring waiting for a place to happen~

Greatly enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

2 posted 2008-04-04 11:47 AM

Frickin' awesome, IG. Loved this!!

Indigo

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2008-04-04 12:45 PM

Love you, love your writing, always have.

Jason

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

4 posted 2008-04-04 01:41 PM

Beautiful. vivid picture of talking death and life.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2008-04-04 02:17 PM

I can never decide which I like more, Spring or Fall...when it's Spring I love it more and when it's Fall I love it more...

I love this InkedOne!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-04-04 04:59 PM

beautiful

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2008-04-04 08:02 PM

You write Mother well, lady Mish.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-04-04 08:57 PM

wonderful and then some! thank you

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

9 posted 2008-04-05 02:54 AM

i love daffodils and i can see this picture in my mind.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2008-04-05 05:41 AM

My goodness, Goddess, this is awesome!

A keeper!

I love it.

and you ...
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-04-05 07:04 AM

ms inky...wellllllllllllllllll done

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2008-04-05 10:13 AM

They loom at the gravesite
no longer disheveled,
just thick in sobriety
this morning, hungover~~~

great description~~

M

RC Langill
Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 104

13 posted 2008-04-05 10:47 AM

Standing in this scene, there is little I can do but sigh, and nod in agreement.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2008-04-05 11:03 AM

and what a grand entrance it is~
You set the mood like none other.

Pretty, nice write~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

15 posted 2008-04-05 11:04 AM

thanks bluesie
long time
nice to see your breezin through
looking forward to your own words of poetica

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2008-04-05 05:12 PM

Hello Michele...I could see this....such a touch you have to words and spring.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

17 posted 2008-04-05 06:37 PM

Inkedgoddess,

Nice going Hon, April's like that.

I'm waiting for Spring.

Bobby

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2008-04-06 04:46 AM

Move over Elvis ....
.... Winter is leaving the building!! : )

Ct

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