Open Poetry #42 |
The Journey Home |
Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
The Journey Home Man set out long ago across the field of time no map to follow just a star to guide him that God left for a sign. The journey was marked as a zigzag line etched into the stone and when he makes it to the other side he'll finally find his home. A place where Man can live in peace free from the thief and all his troubles far behind for the world he lives in now is just a reflection of his mind. Man's still on this journey as it remains until this day and God still sends him blessings to help him on his way It seems life has always been a struggle but that was written in the stone and make no mistake it's no twist of fate that only Love can bring him home. Now home is where the heart is and I know these words are true there's no distance great or small that can make me forget my love for you so if you see him walking don't be sad he's not alone with his Woman right beside him their love will take them home.... Joe Crow "May the things I know be limited only by my imagination" |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Joe this is a wonderful piece, I hope you continue posting in open I enjoy your work so much....pity so many seem to be lost in the fields and unable to find the right path... Good work my friend, John [This message has been edited by effjayel (04-05-2008 06:23 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A wonderfully romantic and philosophical write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Jeffry Dogma Junior Member
since 2008-03-24
Posts 13 |
Great Piece. I loved reading it. www.poemhunter.com/jeffry-dogma |
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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Thank You all! John, What's up? I've been waiting to read more from you and Earth Angel.... Joe |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Joe, I have recently returned to work after surgey & have way too much catching up to do, I have popped in here occasionally but truth be told, I am having no creative urges just lately. I am hoping the great posts I have been reading might kick start my muse.... I have been on to your site a number of times lately & it is an amazing body of work & collection of posters you have there. Please keep posting in open as I do admire your thoughts & writing in here. John |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh, this has brought tears to my eyes and even given me a little hope... You have written of my soul mate and me and our horrendous struggle to move forward through our ultimate loss… Thank you for writing this and more so for sharing it… Tammy<333 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful and touching. And the truth. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
such beauty in your work Joe... lovely gifting here... .love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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