Open Poetry #42 |
Picturing It In My Mind |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Picturing It In My Mind As I look into the mirror Is it the future I could see Arms around my waist As our eyes gaze lovingly Captivated by the image How romantic it would be Looking into the future Perhaps this could be me Love and romance I view Seeing smiles on her face Picturing it in my mind In those visions I embrace A romantic couple I see As thoughts turned to you Still here I am wishing Hoping dreams come true HopeĀ©2008 |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
Wow nice poem, I especially like the accompanying picture which really adds something. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Christine, I think you captured every single little girl's, tween's, and teen's dream in a nutshell there. I know I had that moment once in my lifetime too, in my own Gramma's attic. Lovely! Just a lovely poem. Carpe' Diem |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very beautiful. Lovely poem. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful words here dear Hope love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Hope I hope your dreams do come true whatever you may dream for. I always enjoy your poems. Lindsay |
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