Open Poetry #42 |
posting and cat's purr coins |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
we peeled stamps off our envelopes just to taste the glue again like it was when we were other people in younger skin tennis shoes I heard your bare feet running looking for towels for a spill and I was poking holes in the sky with my pony on a stick there were no commercials long enough for our love times to heal only slow motion movie stars that enjoyed watching us change channels then replay the wanting parts again til we had them down in our memories and mailed them to ourselves later somewhere else in time to read them and come back here to our future _____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's so good that you have memorized everything so well , because to plunge into your poetry in this present moment is an experience that I wouldn't want to miss! Timeless! Love, Margherita |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
quite wonderful! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, This is an enjoyable write. It brings back some good memories. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is very lovely Mr Daark... you make me want to lose myself somewhere for you to come rescue me... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ayearofdust Junior Member
since 2008-03-31
Posts 11 |
I really enjoyed reading this. It will stick in my mind for some time. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend _________________ seouliar, thank you for the read ______________ bobby-jay, thank you sir for the friendly touch ________________ ms r&b, thanks hon for the eyes _________________ a.y.o.d, thanks so much for the read and welcome to the pip place |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do write so effortlessly... it's always a pleasure to read you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Sun, you smile my mind with your soft touch. Thanx babe |
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