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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA 
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I'm feeling a bit better It seems like its healing fast I'm greatful it wasn't worse I could be in a cast! I'm still taking my meds They make me feel great :P I'm happy they have meds like this It's something to really appreciate Thank you for all your comments They made me smile Maybe I'll start writing soon Maybe in a little while I can finally move my neck And my back doesn't hurt I just hope that other lady is okay Seems like she got it worse |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
Good poem, though it felt as if it started and stopped to much in the flow was not quite as fluid as it could have been |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
It wasn't really supposed to be a good poem, more like a 5 min thing explaining that I feel better after my car wreck. But thank you.  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think it is a very nice poem that does it's job and informs us of your condition. I am so glad to hear that you are feeling better. careful with the meds, some people get carried away. Hugs, Ida |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
haha thank you Ida. No, I promise I won't get carried away. My dad keeps them away. Plus, I don't like doing that |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Be careful with those meds They could get your head in a whirl The pain wont last And I'm glad you are not in a cast 'Cos it could be "My name is Earl...." Hope you are feeling a little perkier now Jess John |
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