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Open Poetry #42

insecurity

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-03-30 11:03 AM

Insecurity
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The bike and its rounds,
Everyday at this time,
The sound like a child
Whining in insecurity.
Air fiddles with her hair who
Stands at the balcony.

From there the air will go
To the lady amid
Rubbles. She wants pieces
Of her innocent daughter.
Though the bombed premises
Has no security.

clever talks delay friendship!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-03-30 02:33 PM

poddarku,

Beautiful - and so sad. How sad, too, that this is now a picture that we all can see and understand.

Alison

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-03-30 10:35 PM

very good.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-31 09:09 AM

Heartwrenching, dear Ku! There is always a great deal of emotion in your poetic works.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-03-31 09:46 AM

so sad

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-04-01 04:58 PM

Ku, some of us do not realise just how lucky we are... John

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