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Do Not Count On My Vote
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Do Not Count On My Vote |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Do Not Count On My Vote it is all much too loud and I do not like the noise and I have grown weary of the political and romantic rhetoric just more words to get you on their side of empty and the flattery is just a skin too thin to leave you lacking when the whole team is there watching you standing on the sidelines wall flowering you have forgotten from where it is you came abandoned quit telling me who it is I should be I have legs and know to stand if you were my hero you wouldn’t have to keep telling me "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just more words to get you on their side of empty.. so many great lines, Helen especially the ending  M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Way to go, Helen Ida |
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c_fuller Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 52california |
"i have legs and i know where to stand" absolutely love this line. and the ending is great also. marry me? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
like this...James |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Marvelous!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very good. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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