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My love for you
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My love for you |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
I write this profession detailing my soul being ripped into two Words delicately strung together I shall solemnly give to you All things beautiful that have a beginning also have saddening ends Over roses and thorns we stretch inextricably and bend The palm of your hands always so sweet and moist With one delicate touch and I am raised by your heavenly hoist Your two dark pearls piercing every single layer Until they reach my soul and set it alight as if by flare We rode the waves together this year, Every moment blessed with a naked wealth Now I cannot afford to be austere Lest I want to sink with an ineffective stealth A knight in shining armor, the perfection of man I wish it where so but that I am not my sweet and darling Ann All I can amount to is me, and I have given you that rest assure My love for you is sworn and inextricably pure Dark clouds on the horizon have been looming for some time All good things come to an end, to me that is nothing but empty rhyme When the storm unleashes its fury I shall not wish to resign Fate wields its sword undeservedly too much upon love in its prime However your happiness and prosperity for me is of number one concern If need be I will back down, acknowledge and turn Let it be known if nothing else you my first love, love you I certainly do Please remember in life to do what is right and true for you |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
fine write. Very good. I enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
this: "All I can amount to is me.." is a truth that stabs at the gut. Alot of gems in this. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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