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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. White clouds Blue sky With sunlight bright On sidewalks finally Free of snow Flights of geese That are coming back Seagulls along the shore With hope Expecting miracles I turn and find As usual You missing From the scene The green leaves Are late this year Or so it seems . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I feel a sense of absence, amid beauty and serenity. A very fine poem. Art |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
nice write JJ |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Very poetic poem. beautiful! enjoyed |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply excellent! major applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
more major applause. Ida |
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Thalen Junior Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 35New Jersey, USA |
Very well written. I enjoy how lightly your poem touches its themes, like pressing softly of the keys of the piano, only to listen to the small sounds, echoing deeply in the soul. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
But this is very good, very poignant. |
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