Open Poetry #42 |
Knowing You |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I can paint a little. I could paint your portrait if you had a personality. Perhaps an abstract... Uh...no. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, Ah, the young portrait painter, doing well by doing good--uhh--well--maybe. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
how lovely this short poem. Paint a portrait of my emotion, you would find that the sky was not large enough. But it would end at the tip of your brush. Beautiful poem and it made me think. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Strike two. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Ida, i don't like abstract paintings but i like your poem and i can't help to ask myself : are our emotions abstract ? for me they aren't... thanks yann |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These little bites of poetry are great for my sweet-truth, Ida. Thank you! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A little different, Ida, but still Ida. An abstract would be suitable for me in shades of gray---I am an enigma unto myself! Art |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your comments. Just doing a little testing for sense of humor. I really do know someone who appears to me to be totally devoid of personality. Ida |
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