Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix In The Terrible Room |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Felix remembers the craziness in that room, the loud smashing of things against the wall, his mother running screaming down the hall, the insane craziness of it all. He remembers his father crazy drunk, waving his gun around, and around in the air. Like a merry-go-round it was, with the calliope screams and shouts, enough to wake the very dead. It all made Felix want to run. All he wanted to do was get away from the craziness in that terrible room. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Been in that room. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh poor Felix... I hope he and his Mom got out of that craziness... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, I'm sorry to hear that. Many of us have been there. They should lock the door to that room--from the outside, so no one can get in. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Yes, I'm happy to report they did, many years ago. Poor Dad. Bobby |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wasn't sure I could handle this one - you did good, Bobby. A |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
terrible life. I am glad that Felix lived through it without too much hurt. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
how could Felix bear all this ? Nice and interesting poem... yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, Well, Felix got out of that situation. His father’s story was a very sad one. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Seoulair, Yes, Felix is just fine. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
2islander2, The resilience of the human spirit is an amazing gift. Bobby |
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