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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2008-03-26 03:51 PM

TwiNight

How can I leave you…
I have watched o’er you this day
Saw the smiling laughter glitter
Golden in the touch of hand
To child’s hair,

Glimpsed upon an eye, spying
Curve of hip, not slender
Yesterday’s form but the
Soft flow of tomorrows
Yet to come

Saw a hand stroking a sleeve,
Enjoying yet again the
Story of one hundred
Hearings and more, waiting
For the chuckle at the end

I saw a dream lay down
In the grass, eyes skyward,
Hope floating
On plans of future success
All within a grasp of get

I saw a bend of waist
Over toys and remnants,
Hurrying, scurrying toward
That rush of wait, wait
Today’s almost gone…

And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…

~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
3 March 2002

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-26 05:28 PM

quote:
And then I left you with
Hope’s rainbow along your horizon,
Hoping tomorrow will see you
Mirroring me
With your radiance again…

Such a dreamy vision, dear Karilea, accompanied by a picture to get lost in.

Soft beauty reaching out to touch the heart.

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

2 posted 2008-03-26 10:06 PM

Karilea, this is just beautiful. I love the picture and the poem.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-26 10:08 PM

Lovely, Karilea,
Ida

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2008-03-26 10:15 PM

Wonderful words to go with a dreamy, perfect picture. Love, Joyce

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2008-03-26 10:28 PM

Lovely picture, lovely words Karilea,

You wrote it well. A big hug dear lady.

Lindsay

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-03-26 10:33 PM

beautiful

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

7 posted 2008-03-27 03:01 AM

very very beautiful.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-03-27 03:49 PM

"Hope’s rainbow"

Karilea
this one sings me a lonely song

so lovely

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-03-29 01:39 AM

Incredible beauty ... you write visuals that meld into my brain.

A

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2008-03-29 07:43 PM

Karilea~
There is a soft motherly beauty to this~
It is lovely ... so lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

11 posted 2008-03-30 07:59 PM

Lovely, Karilea, just like its poetess... Be well,my friend.

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