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Open Poetry #42
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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland
0 posted 2008-03-25 05:28 PM


The rusted sword of youthful swing
Melting into an ineffectual thing
Stale steel staining Satan’s playground  
Proud faculties crumble without sound

My rose blossom grace the wind
You head east, I west
Livid and sad you darn bet
Though that’s all you hear
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-03-25 05:42 PM

Sounds like the inside of my head,
Brian, with the back and forth
of things only I can understand.

So...of course, this fed me.

Thank you!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-03-25 07:10 PM

I enjoyed your thoughts here Brian   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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