Open Poetry #42 |
hey there stranger... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hey there stranger with eyes that soften the inner sides of all I have if I let your tanskin hands touch me with ease will you smile me again and ooze words that offer an insight to your soul and gift me your presence on my day Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Hi Roniece, So it seems both spring & love is in the air down under....nice write, John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, This is very nice. Is today your birthday? If it is, happy birthday, if it isn't, happy birthday anyway. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Happy spring fever, Roniece. Ida |
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Elaine Junior Member
since 2008-03-04
Posts 26So. CA |
Hi Roniece, One may never know what the smile could do for that stranger on any given day! Good write. Elaine |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' applause!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Roniece, it is the first time i read you and i am delighted. I know it is automn in australia but your poem is sunshine... thanks yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet Roniece, you bring a smile with your inquiring words that speak of love. May you always have reason to wear your bright smile, dear friend. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
How could he say no to one as beautiful as you? How could anyone deny one who writes this? I say that both are an impossibility. Love, Ali |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So nice...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
takes the strange right out of it!! : ) Happy Easter weekend! Ct |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Love this dreamy write, Roniece! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all my lovely Pipfriends for your wonderful comments... I appreciate you all very much.. love RDB Yo' Bobby.. not my birthday (I get to celebrate it on Xmas Eve though!) but thanks for your good wishes... you made me smile love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b...if he wouldn't I would...kewl stuff ms |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Oh Roniece, you give hope to strange people everywhere... Enjoyed...! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark.. thank you, I'll keep that in mind! RDB Simon...strange how you always make me smile! thank you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My dear friend with a smile like yours how could he not?? This is a beautiful poetic wish m'dear. Happy Sunday to you sweetie!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you my sweet friend Donna.. you do warm my heart with your words... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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banished_fairy Junior Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 31Happy in H*ll, PA |
I know what that "look" can do to your soul. Touching write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you BF... you are very kind to comment on my work... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Delightfully warm, Roniece. Enjoyed this one very, very much. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, a beautiful write my friend, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Sunshine and Rick, your comments have brightened my day! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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