Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix In The Snow |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Felix and his Mom get along real fine. Mom always treats him right. Felix sometimes wishes that Mom made better choices about the company she keeps. One guy in particular kinda ticks him off. He’s the violent, drunken, sort. He likes to throw things in the house. Like throwing beer cans through a window in the winter time. Trouble is, he picked the window facing North during a snow storm. Like a lot of times, the heat is off. They have snow piled up in the front room. Felix wishes that creep would just go away. Felix wishes he could fix the window. None of that is going to happen. Felix and his Mom are left, freezing their butts off. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I hope Felix and his Mom got that window fixed eventually Bobby, it sounds like it was a very cold winter for them... I hope Felix's Mom saw the light and got rid of that guy... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, Felix says thanks for your good wishes. It's just a typical Philadelphia winter for a typical Philadelphia Felix. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...kindof like leaving the icebox open...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, Oh—it can be way worse than that. The water pipes can freeze, and burst, and the toilet bowl can freeze solid. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, winter has a different look to it when you're cold and hungry and can't do anything about it. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, You're absolutely right Hon. That's the way it is with us natural people. Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi bobby,always nice to read you...I've been a winter in 1996 without heating (but winters are not so cold here (minus one or two the night some few days)), it was terrible but i think it's worse for a kid... regards yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Then you know what it's like. Thanks for reading and commenting. Bobby |
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