| Open Poetry #42 |
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Serving Up A Second-Helping Of Strawberries |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Strawberry Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ 𠤤¤¤ 礤¤•••¤¤¤ç çStrawberry moonç across• a Milky Way• sky Spooning • with • moonbeams upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high scrumptious • delight in • the night • sky Melt-in-the-mind•flavor so very•appealing Strawberry • moon • so • very • revealing Once • in yearly phasing • she will • come nothing • in this •June sky• left • undone Celestial• dessert in crystal • of dish might • be time to make a • wish Strawberry moon come again •Creme dela Creme• *A delicious redo for my friend, Yann* ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Marge, such a juicy poem, and wonderful writing, i had a feeling when i read it and enjoyed the dedication. Do you know the french poet Guillaume Appolinaire, he did what you do with talent, drawing a strawberry with verses about strawberries, or a fountain with verses about fountains etc .... He called that Calligrammes (the french word) I would like to do things like that but i'm not so easy with my computer.... have a nice day yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Marge...might have to get some of these for later tonight after the cello concert...James |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is a delicious poem. Love it |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Marge! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I'm glad I had dinner before I read this luscious piece, or it would make me hungry! Lovely! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Berry, berry good, Marge. I made a strawberry cheesecake for today's dinner at our daughters. This is so clever, making it look just like a scrumptious berry. Rae |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always a pretty write Marge! Enjoyed!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked i |
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