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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-03-22 07:03 PM

  The  Promise of  Dawn

In the deserted forest
  twilight
just beyond the trembling
  dawn,
night and day drift
  together in a moment,
mid sunbeams dancing
  with shadows and
dark uncertain shapes
merged against the
  illuming sky...
morning recalls
all things left unfinished,
and the infinite promise
of  life’s reawakenings
in the stirring hours
yet to come.

     ---b. e. adams (3/22/08)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-22 07:09 PM

Dawn smiles while it savors your delightful words. Now let the sun rise and kiss your cheek!

Magical scenery!

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-03-22 07:10 PM

"mid sunbeams dancing
with shadows and
dark uncertain shapes
merged against the
illuming sky..."
Wow, Bruce, this is stunningly beautiful!!!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-03-22 08:25 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Yes, indeed, stirring hours yet to come.

It's a good Easter poem.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-03-23 04:33 AM

thanks

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-03-23 04:41 AM

"the infinite promise of life's reawakenings" I like this very much.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-03-23 08:50 AM

a pleasure to read you Bruce! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

7 posted 2008-03-23 10:48 PM

This is a fine, strong and elegant poem, savored and re-read many times.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-03-24 05:13 AM

enjoyed...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2008-03-24 10:10 AM

Bruce~

Stunningly lovely~

'morning recalls
all things left unfinished'

Morning *sighs*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2008-03-24 12:42 PM

nice

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