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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2008-03-22 05:37 PM

we have our preference
    we see with our eyes
    those things we take to heart
    until we see what lies
time is always needed
time sees everything
    those things we take to heart
    and those in time we string
        ... what faith will prove
            for rest to see
            that seconds move
            maybe you to me

we have our preference
    the things we take first
    but for those who can wait
    seconds might quench the thirst
time may be deleted
untied by its string
    if what we take to heart
    seconds were everything
        ... what faith will prove
            for some to see
            that seconds move
            such as you and me

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-22 06:04 PM

Patience is not everybody's virtue!

Enjoyed your wise and very well rendered thoughts.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-03-22 06:27 PM

I like this one...Time sees anything, it's a great verse....

regards

yann

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-03-22 09:39 PM

..."time may be deleted
untied by its string
    if what we take to heart
    seconds were everything"...

You inspire,
I hope I can do this verse justice, for you put to words what has been coursing through my mind lately.
Very well done.  Happy Easter Weekend!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2008-03-22 11:17 PM

this speaks of that feeling
of urgency
those seconds that
we clamor for, for a
glimpse of heaven

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-03-23 06:02 AM

yes, I enjoyed this very much.. live in the moment!

thank you for your nice response to my work, I appreciate you....

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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