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bow your cello
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bow your cello |
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sparsile New Member
since 2008-03-19
Posts 5 |
bow your cello walk between the willows stepping on the dry stones looking out for fish bones sleeping like a brown bear shut up in his warm lair wearing soft synthetic fur curled up in an easy chair breathing in and breathing out dreaming what you dream about dark hair falling in loose cascades frames your face like wild waves standing stone that keeps the sea from storming love you truly even while you’re snoring something spoke to me through the trees that night traveled to us, floating on the moonlight filling up the midnight with questions that we could not answer stepping down the smooth stones watching out for pinecones feet sifting through the warm sand hand in hand, staring at the waves |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
sparsile, I enjoyed this. Welcome. Alison |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Sparsile, welcome to Pip & a very entertaining debut. I like the rhythm & metre of this piece, good job John |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An enjoyable piece. Welcome to Passions. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful walk you've taken us on: "something spoke to me through the trees that night traveled to us, floating on the moonlight" Lovely imagery! Welcome to the blues. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sparsile. (adj) of a star not belonging to any constellation You don an interesting name Poet. There's something about this poem that brought me back for a second read. The highest compliment a writer can be paid, I think.  Nicely done. |
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sparsile New Member
since 2008-03-19
Posts 5 |
Thanks so much for all of your kind comments, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem! I look forward to reading more of yours as well sincerely sparsile |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome to our pages blue Sparsile.. I too, enjoyed your wonderful words... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I found this to be quite refreshing too. You engaged me and drew me in--reminded me to BREATHE... thank you and welcome. |
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