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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-03-19 07:03 PM

Through Times,
Where skies cover with the clouds,
Where love stands forever,
We should allow time of our life,
We should have love,
In our hearts,
I always remember our love,
During years,
Following my heart
To yours,
I will take your hand
I will make the things right,
I will keep watching over you
I will keep loving you
Love will stay forever,
I'll find a path
To yours,
Through times.....

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-03-19 07:07 PM

Dear Vandana,

I very much like the words and thoughts expressed in this poetic work.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-03-19 07:21 PM

Fantastic...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-03-19 07:45 PM

Dear vandana,

Lovely poetry.

Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-03-20 11:20 AM

i enjoyed readind your poem  ...and hope reading you again...
   thanks

   yann

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-03-20 02:09 PM

Vandana, you have found your niche. Another stunning piece...I wrote that before I saw that it rhymed & now I have, I'm leaving it !

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2008-03-20 10:58 PM

I think this one is my most favorite from you!! Loved this

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2008-03-22 10:17 PM

Vandana,

This is a wonderful poem. My only suggestion would be to lose some of the commas, as not all of them are needed. It might make for a better flow of your lovely thoughts.

I'm so very proud of you, for you've come so far in all of your poetry in the years that I have known you.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-03-23 09:09 AM

beautiful Vandana! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2008-03-23 11:34 AM

"I'll find a path
To yours,
Through times..... :

beautiful thoughts and poem, Vandana

M

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