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Open Poetry #42

Simple poem

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-03-18 11:45 PM

Slight wind cooling Earth while rustling leaves
Warm, steaming hot sun giving to plant life
Nature bestows upon the living
The vitality to endure what is necessary

[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-19-2008 01:16 PM).]

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-03-19 02:36 AM

This is very profound, Enjoyed
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-03-19 11:49 PM

Jessica,

I, too, liked this poem a lot. It's thought-provoking, yet is beautiful.

Alison

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2008-03-20 07:50 PM

I especially like the ending:

"Nature bestows upon the living
The vitality to endure what is necessary"

well said!

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

4 posted 2008-03-23 11:04 AM

I have always enjoyed poetry about nature. This is very descriptive and well written.

Kathy

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simon
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since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

5 posted 2008-03-23 02:56 PM

Enjoyed...!

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