Open Poetry #42 |
One Drops |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One Drops Singular The welcome tapping of spring rain One drops Then another, and another A rhapsody delights the earth Building in momentum Bidding promise and future Singular One drops And then, another Copyright Kkh 3/17/08 |
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Elaine Junior Member
since 2008-03-04
Posts 26So. CA |
I liked this. It is has a nice rain to it!! Pun!! ha ha. enjoyed Elaine |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is a delightful feel to this, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ I'm so glad that I took a peek in at this little gem~ I adore the sound of a rhapsody ... you've written it well~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
TD, that sounds a whole lot nicer than the rain I usually have to listen to. Although, I do enjoy being indoors at night & hearing it rattle on our tin chimney pipe John |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
as long as there are no tornadoes doing "megadrops"....I'll sit back and listen to the pitter and patter of spring rains. Thanx TD, nicely written |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
TD I can feel the rain gently building to a crecendo lovely |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine Spring 'write!' I am especially fond of: The welcome tapping of spring rain... A rhapsody delights the earth... Building in momentum Bidding promise and future" applause!! |
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