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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2008-03-16 02:19 PM



You're on the lift
looking up
I'm looking down
your heaven
my earth
my feet
your clouds
you over there
me in my mood
of autumns lost leaves
kicking em up
wishing spring
heeds its fall
you over there
me skipping leaves
tracing your voice
I grin at your smile
I guess for the time
we can say we connect
with veil touching tips
on our surrogate sky.

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-03-16 02:26 PM


Hi, Michelle!

"me in my mood
of autumns lost leaves"

~ Unique way of describing such a moos.

May his heaven touch your earth and bring you forever spring.


Linda

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-03-16 02:56 PM


Mish, you've left me smiling at your 'surrogate sky' concept.
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-03-16 03:38 PM


This worked well for me, good write   John
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-03-16 04:54 PM


Wonderful...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-03-16 05:37 PM


The connection is there and beautiful and strong under the "surrogate" sky!

Love this much!!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
6 posted 2008-03-16 06:36 PM


ms inky, you make me..well you know, smile..enjoyed you here
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-03-16 08:44 PM


Lovely!


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
8 posted 2008-03-22 05:35 AM


lovely thoughts ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
9 posted 2008-03-22 05:29 PM


now I see how skies tremble ....

Happy Easter weekend!

Ct

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
10 posted 2008-03-25 09:11 PM


An intimate moment.

Wonderful!


Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
11 posted 2008-03-26 08:49 AM


I loved this! it reminds me of a certain friend I have....me over here and he over there...but we manage to smile each others way once in the while..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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