The arriving of spring ( I know its still early)

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Open Poetry #42

The arriving of spring ( I know its still early)

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

0 posted 2008-03-13 06:00 PM

Flowers are blooming
and birds are singing.
The earth smell fresh and new.
The days grow longer
and the nights grow warmer.
The world seems reborn
life begins anew each day,
as each blade of grass
or flower sprouts
or a baby bird is hatched.
Spring oh glorious spring
has arrived at last.

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

1 posted 2008-03-13 06:20 PM

I feel the breeze now.nice, soft

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-03-13 07:14 PM

I cant wait until Spring is fully here because I am so excited for all that Mother Nature beauty to show and to see all those wonderful colors surrounding us, every step we take..

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-03-14 09:31 PM

A lovely breath of Spring
much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-03-14 10:21 PM

BugBuggy,

The line:

The earth smell fresh and new.

Is a sentence fragment, and doesn’t make sense.

Changing “smell” to “smells” would sound better, and also change it into a proper English Language sentence.

Bobby

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

5 posted 2008-03-14 11:56 PM

thank you all for your kind words about my poem it is always great to read them...I appreciate any and all help in making my poetry better thanks a bunch Bobby..

BugBuggy

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2008-03-21 08:32 AM

very lovely.
I enjoyed the read,could hear the birds singing, the scent of flowers in bloom.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-03-21 08:59 AM

And today it is Spring!
Very lovely Spring song.
May all feel this renewal deep within.

Love,
Margherita

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

8 posted 2008-03-21 05:37 PM

thank you so much Froggy and Margherita for your very kind words..yes spring is finally here thank you very much

BugBuggy

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