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Open Poetry #42

Harmony and Flux

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-03-12 07:04 PM

       Harmony and Flux

Frosty evening bells…
announce a fine-silver moon
that climbs the reverse horizon
from where these ancient hills
are tending their flocks
of grand sunset clouds.
A wispy-cold mist
teases the host of moonbeams
  and shadows
marshaled for this occasion
by the night…
to join in the timeless dance
of universal wonder, harmony,
  and delight
in Nature’s infinitely nested
  creative flux
and eternal oneness of all!

      ---b. e. adams (3/12/08)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-03-12 07:39 PM

I like the thought of hills
'tending flocks' of 'grand sunset clouds.'
Another fine write, poet.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-03-12 08:59 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is good work. I like the idea of "eternal oneness of all". It made the trip worthwhile.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-13 12:21 PM

No one else writes about nature the way you do, Bruce.
Ida

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

4 posted 2008-03-13 11:36 AM

I agree with Ida, Poet. You do have a unique voice when it comes to speaking about nature. This write is a fine example of that voice.

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-03-13 01:55 PM

Bruce, yet again you fired up the flux capacitor in my imagination,

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