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Magenta Velvet - (Reshining)
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Magenta Velvet - (Reshining) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Magenta Velvet ~*Marge Tindal*~ There is a velvet to the twilight sky that caresses the coming of night Cloaked in magenta's soft beauty awaiting the twinkle of stars-in-light~ Soft velvet stairs to the welkin gate hold sweet dreams-in-waiting wish Gentle the movement of moon-in-phase across the ebon in galactic swish~ There is a velvet to the morning that cuddles the meadow in dew Moisturized wishes now granted in the dawning of love-in-renew~ There is a velvet to the heartbeat of lovers in union of morn Poems are made in the gentle-of-night to be shared on the dawn newly-born~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Love the twinkling effect, as well as the romantic rhyme. God bless, Rae |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh Marge!-- This is so lovely! ARCTIC WIND p.s.- Love the shinyness lol |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh Marge, this is absolutely beautiful. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Romantic and beautiful! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Love it |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it has a smooth and aromatic aftertaste clever talks delay friendship! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Marge, With or without the twinkling stars, I'd have to say this is one of my favorites you've written, if not my favorite. It's breathtaking. There are some poems that flow effortlessly when I read them, yet I don't linger upon the words. Still, I think they're very good. When a poem flows effortlessly and it controls the speed with which I read, slowing me down to inhale the essence, I call that great! Yours did just that! A keeper! miscellanea |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed reading this Marge... j. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I thank you all so much for letting me share a little of my thoughts with you~ I recall the morning that I originally wrote this one ... out on the patio with my second morning cup of coffee ... the words, "there is a velvet to the morning" kept flying around me ... I captured it and let it write itself to the page~ Appreciating all replies ...~ Miscellanea~ What a lovely, lovely compliment ... thank you~  Effortlessly is JUST THE WAY IT CAME TO ME~ **I just peeked in the archives ... this is what I wrote on the original poem** quote:*Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Delightful in its very nice flow of inspiration, dear Marge! Love, Margherita  |
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