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Open Poetry #42
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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
0 posted 2008-03-11 11:56 PM


Say it persists
tell me it falls again
that ice castles
order welcomed sights
of crispy powders
crunched underfoot
dismissing
unwelcoming heaps
of flaky cold
say it falls
generously
piles up
pitifully
but as rays strike
in concentrated accord
and their radiance
warms snowy targets,
fleece encased forms,
say it persists
but temporarily.
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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
Posts 353
LA, CA
1 posted 2008-03-12 12:19 PM

beautiful. enjoyed the read. very good indeed.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-03-12 07:54 AM

Very nice indeed. Made me think of temporaneity ... as it is something that touches us all, constant transformation will lead us into eternity.

Love.
Margherita
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-03-12 09:49 AM

Beautifully Penned

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