Open Poetry #42 |
"Second Chances" |
Arius Miura de Galdri Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 90Michigan, USA |
"Second Chances" The sun has risen in the East And with it raised my spirits Again I've given life a chance With no more need to fear it A storm of doubt was plaguing me With fear and thoughts of darkness My life without you felt too long When trapped within such starkness My mourning now is at an end My future lies before me I turn to face the rising sun And let its light restore me I'll leave my grief behind me now 'Tis not my fate to bear it I'll live my life with no regrets And live for you, I swear it AMdG |
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matronmedusa Member
since 2008-03-08
Posts 89Alabama, USA |
Very nice! |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Beautiful. love the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to read this...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written ARCTIC WIND |
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Arius Miura de Galdri Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 90Michigan, USA |
Thank you all, your comments really inspire me to keep on writing! AMdG |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Ready? Aim.....Fire ! This was very good, please do continue to post.....John |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Arius Miura de Galdri I always smile when I see you have posted a poem. I love this. Lots. Really. A |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
much enjoyed the read, my friend... j. |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
I really enjoyed this.Good job |
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