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matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2008-03-10 11:26 PM

What if I told you
I created the stars
that for you I had them set?

Would you believe me
if I said I loved you
long before we met?

I graced the skies
with adoring eyes
so they all could worship you
and when the sun gives rise
and darkness dies
Know it is all
for you.

Talyn
Junior Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 47
North Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-03-10 11:33 PM

Just beautiful!!
I love it!
Thank you so much for sharing.

Talyn

"Gang aft a-gley,
an lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
for promised joy"
--Robert Burn

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-03-11 12:07 PM

Melissa,

So beautiful.
I really love this one.

Alison

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

3 posted 2008-03-11 12:12 PM

Beautiful heart song of love. Beautiful.

matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

4 posted 2008-03-11 01:03 AM

Thank you...

very much

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

5 posted 2008-03-11 02:41 AM

I loved this. I have a sun tat on the back of my neck for my little girl. 'Cause she's my sunshine

Thanks for sharing.

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

6 posted 2008-03-11 01:42 PM

Damn Melissa, you just keep getting better, this one gave me goosebumps, you nailed it...good job IWIHWT!!

John

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-03-11 05:09 PM

Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2008-03-12 08:59 AM

Excellent writing, Melissa.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2008-03-13 05:37 PM

Wonderful...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2008-03-13 06:50 PM

beautiful sentiment

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2008-03-13 08:34 PM

Beautifully written, my friend.

j.

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