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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-10 06:12 PM



Why is it people take advantage
Of our mind, body, and soul?
Or Criticize us
By the way we look, think, and act?
There is only two possibilities…
Jealousy or shallowness
Two of the worst things to be
Two things I choose not to be
I see and hear
Everything that happens to the unfortunate
I try to help…
But sometimes it gets worse
But you know what?
I don’t care what people think
As long as I know I tried
I try to help those in need everyday
No matter their appearance
The way they think
The way they act
It doesn’t and should never matter.

[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-10-2008 08:37 PM).]

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-03-10 06:55 PM


precisely!...wise words and a grand-fine philosophy
well expressed!

applause!

p.s.:  fine choice of "P.I.P.-land" UserName (ID) too!

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-10 07:11 PM


No, indeed it should never matter. Your sensitive heart shines through in this piece.
In sharing love there is joy.

Love.
Margherita

Alison
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3 posted 2008-03-10 09:40 PM


Jessica,

Some people are just like that, aren't they? We can't change them.  We can only learn from them and see how we DON'T want to be.  You write some wise words.  I am enjoying reading your poetry.

Alison

matronmedusa
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since 2008-03-08
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4 posted 2008-03-10 09:53 PM


Unconditional love.

Too many time there are too many conditions.

Talyn
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since 2008-03-09
Posts 47
North Carolina, USA
5 posted 2008-03-10 11:25 PM


Very nice appearence should not matter.

Talyn

"Gang aft a-gley,
an lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
for promised joy"
--Robert Burn

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