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Joyful Call.
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Joyful Call. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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So early he calls, repeating notes before light has risen high into dreaming minds of people. Difused light and murk mornings merging in starkness. From dreams she peeps far off from his perching pedestal, listening to his love pride cast onto the wind, carried to her senses to quicken her breast, begining her own thoughts of jostling nestlings clamouring with sun bathing their faces and joy of pride tingling through every part of her living being. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Phil, this was exquisite. ~ A birdie love poem of the highest order.  "listening to his love pride cast onto the wind, carried to her senses to quicken her breast" ~ So utterly tweet! I mean, "sweet". I also appreciated the ambiance that you so poetically created! Smiling here Linda  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Linda..even birds feel love...otherwise why do the males sing? Why have such richness and variety to their calls if they were not thinking of the one(s) that they send their love calls to? And why do the females listen if they do not want to be impressed? They want to hear his love call..it is the precursor to the race of life.. Thank you for your kind words.. God bless.. Goldenrose This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Phil |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
March..thank you for your kindness.. Peace be with you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Vandana..thank you for your words.. Peace be with you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply excellent! v. serious, sustained applause!! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Bruce.. to have excellent from an excellent writer as you is praise indeed..thank you.. Peace be with you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You captured this tune of love very beautifully with your sensitive heart, dear Phil. Love, Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Margherita...when the male still calls his love tune and listens for an answer but none is forthcoming, then his heart is sick..but one day a reply will come back and fill his heart with love to make him sing with joy again..thank you for your kind words as always.. Peace be with and God bless.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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