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Open Poetry #42

For Helen

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-03-09 06:02 PM

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The moon
That old man—
With many lovers

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LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

1 posted 2008-03-09 06:45 PM

Go slowly Old Man
Sun is pouring out her smile
One Crater a time

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-03-09 07:04 PM

Indeed! A heavenly meeting point!

Wonderful.

Love.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2008-03-09 07:22 PM

very good!

major applause!!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2008-03-09 07:55 PM

john
i would like to reply with a poem
but...
you are poetry

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-03-09 08:07 PM

Always enjoy your writing, John.
Ida

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2008-03-10 09:07 PM

Thank you all

You’re so wrong Helen
It is a miracle I’m capable
of anything at all

Though not the only,
it is a decent thing I do
not letting myself get in the way
of whoever is trying to touch whatever
if anything is eternally beautiful

Thanks again

John

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