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Open Poetry #42

Keep riding!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-03-07 04:56 AM

So on a Ferris wheel he rides
day in day out as if to hide
the true essential there inside
not meant for my two eyes.

And I know I can if I’m not me
look deep within a mystery
and pull out from the feel
what is or was or still to be.

So in the mind I travel down
into the times where truth is found
and look to see here on the ground
if men are men or women gowned.

But it’s like the ground is meant to be
a place where lies live happily
and yet of mind it too can be
a playground of no certainty.

Keep riding! Ride that Ferris wheel;
truth always steps from mystery!

Helen / 7 March 2007

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-07 07:29 AM

Dear Helen, it's always a special experience to "ride along" your beautifully worded poems, because of their depth and wisdom.

You will always know the truth, because you know how to listen to the voice deep inside.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2008-03-07 08:09 AM

Wonderful and though provoking piece, my friend. Really enjoyed the depths to which it takes one.

jimmy

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-03-07 10:33 AM

Hi, Honey!

"So in the mind I travel down
into the times where truth is found"

~ Yours is a mind that 'sees' the truth and thank you for your continued sharing of those truths through your eloquent, thought-provoking, poetry.

Loving hug,

Linda

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