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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2008-03-06 03:09 PM

Well I couldn't be happier laddy
I found my home today
She's hidden in the pines ya know
And carefully tucked away

Walking in the door, you feel
Your stepping back in time
Porcelain sinks and cupboards tall
And two places to dine

Windows reach from floor to ceiling
Claw foot tubs to soak your sin
Sunshine lurks 'round every corner
All are welcome, Come on in

[This message has been edited by TinaTrivett (03-07-2008 09:42 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-03-06 03:13 PM

Enjoyed...James

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-03-06 03:16 PM

Excellent poem. If you would like you can look at one of mine, I have a different rhythm but we both have the same writing style kinda.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-06 04:53 PM

How exciting! I hope you're happy there.
Ida

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-06 05:22 PM

Home is where your heart dwell. Love the read.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2008-03-06 05:30 PM

A new home...
such an exciting time!
Congratulations, Tina!

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

6 posted 2008-03-06 05:34 PM

Thanks all...yes very excited.

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

7 posted 2008-03-07 11:32 AM

Something happened...not getting the house now..*sigh*

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-03-07 09:00 PM

Yep, the house is gone - but your poetry stands strong and beautiful without it.

I am a fan.

A

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

9 posted 2008-03-07 09:40 PM

Alison...Oh, I'm laughing to myself right now. I hadn't realized that the 'house picture' was gone up above. When I posted, I meant that I might not be living there now. I see you thought I meant the pic...it struck me as so funny...exactly the laugh I needed today. Thank you..

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

10 posted 2008-03-07 09:43 PM

I fixed the pic... *wink*

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2008-03-07 10:43 PM

I love when i move, Its like another adventure into some other world-- But then you miss the other house and Its bitter Sweet lol

thank you for this wonderful read Tina!

ARCTIC WIND

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