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KeyLimeSorbet
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since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

0 posted 2008-03-05 07:40 PM

I've read every book from cover to cover,
but I'm left with the binding, begging for a glance.
These words will make vain, they only show the best of you.
It's a fault of mine, I see you through my heart and the blood turns my eyes to rose.
You could never do anything wrong. You're the perfect prince to your fairy tale, with the perfect happily ever after, but I'm just the pebble on the path.

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

1 posted 2008-03-05 07:43 PM

Very good!!! Enjoyed.
A warm welcome to this wonderful blue land!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2008-03-05 07:46 PM

Whoa Chilli!

way cool! Glad to see you found your way to the blue pages, I want you to post more, k?
Welcome to Pip!
love ya,

me

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

3 posted 2008-03-05 07:46 PM

Girl!! this was awesome!! I loved it

The ending was my favorite...it sucks to feel this way tho LOVE YOU

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2008-03-05 08:14 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Wonderful entrance post!

TD

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2008-03-05 08:38 PM

I know well the sensation of rose colored glasses...
and you wrote of your own experience very well.

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!
Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-03-05 08:48 PM

wow that's awesome!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-03-05 09:12 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!

ARCTIC WIND

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2008-03-05 10:05 PM

A lovely entree... Welcome to our Passionate Poetic World...

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2008-03-05 10:13 PM

just a pebble on the path....what an amazing way to express your thought. I like it!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-03-05 11:33 PM

I am liking this a lot.

Welcome.

Alison

KeyLimeSorbet
Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

11 posted 2008-03-06 09:02 AM

Thank yall so much, i'm glad that it was enoyed! :-)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2008-03-06 09:38 AM

Rachelle~

I like the pebbles thought a lt~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

KeyLimeSorbet
Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

13 posted 2008-03-06 09:45 AM

marge- thank you, when i originally wrote the poem it had a different ending, but i changed it to the pebble thingy, so i'm very glad you liked it! :-)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

14 posted 2008-03-06 11:39 AM

I like your writing, Rachelle. Welcome to PIP.
Ida

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

15 posted 2008-03-06 12:40 PM

Really like it all...but truly loved the way it ended and "...but I'm just the pebble on the path."

Perfect

jimmy

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

16 posted 2008-03-06 12:47 PM

Kind of sad. You remind me of my self lol

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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