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Open Poetry #41

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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2007-08-30 09:03 PM

Poor us, our hearts had met
Clay-lined

Waves of love washed me o'er
ill-timed

Love shall pass again through this day
Neither you nor I will see
No looking back for us my dear
The sun comes only to flee

Shadows seem always to trip my step
I run, with nowhere to go
Perhaps our steps will separate
Allowing my heart to know

if...

Porous, our hearts had met
entwined

Waves of love washed me o'er
sublime

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2007-08-30 09:24 PM

beautiful kris

missing you
sent you an e mail is it still the same?

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2007-08-30 09:55 PM

Sorry, Helen. I didn't get it. I sent you a new one. Perhaps that one will work.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-31 06:10 AM

Enjoyed...James

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2007-08-31 11:44 AM

never give up on your dream, Love will find you when you put your heart out there to be seen.

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2007-08-31 09:44 PM

Lovely..it says so much
You managed to "fit .. much emotion" in "few lines'

Thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2007-09-01 03:41 AM

very good!!!
enjoyed the read.
Tomtoo

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