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Open Poetry #41

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-08-29 10:47 PM

The tiptoes of the shallow water,
As he paved his back to its tiled wonder,

A woman so real,
Her eyes teased his skin
With the pennants of blue

That climbed over
His sins,

And kneeled under
The waters teal eyed current.

A reason with beauty,
A reason to be seen,

As if she could be
His morning sign,
His wine that traded
It’s suave, red, pulse

For her moment
To be his tradition,
His position,

Her pavilion
Mounted within
His bodies poignant cave.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

1 posted 2007-08-29 10:56 PM

Wow...very expresive work here..i loved it.
those expressions made me remember somebody..
thanks for sharing!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-08-30 06:48 PM

Excellent images here

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