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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2007-08-29 07:50 PM


you
let me know
that it was your
time to go
before
I really
ever knew
you
came to me
through broken

radio frequencies....

...Somewhere... Somewhere... Somewhere...

an angel's voice
bridging the space
between
heaven and my heart

There's a place for us

I wish
I wasn't so scared
so that
I could
feel
hear
your subtle ways
again
funny
we bonded ever
so quickly
fell so
comfortably into your arms
funny
how
time really doesn't play a factor
when it comes to love...

A time and a place for us ...

where we'll meet
bond all over
and fall
so comfortably into each others arms
again





If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Barbara Striesand's song "Somewhere" played briefly on my unplugged alarm clock right before my Mum called to let me know my Grandma passed away.  And I found out later that she loved Babs.


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-30-2007 08:17 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-08-30 11:23 AM


I'm sorry for the passing on of your Grandmother, the bond of love will always go on.

This is a very beautiful, sensitive and poignant poem!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-08-30 03:25 PM


Kris, I'm sorry to hear of your Grandmother's passing. Your poem truly stuck a strident chord in my heart ~ and my spirit. Beautifully scribed at this time of your grieving.

There were many quotable lines. The following being a couple of them:

"time really doesn't play a factor
when it comes to love..."

I just went back into "Challenges" and was reading some of the extraordinary accounts that our fellow pipsters posted in my supernatural challenge. This experience with your grandmother and the radio would be a welcome addition to that thread.

Giving you a loving and compassionate hug,

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

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