Open Poetry #41 |
federico fawn |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I never thought of looking back at the man of me looking forward wondering of whatwillbecomes until some federico friday afternoon when the fawn of your eye sides was quiet enough to smile sand songs and the parking lot of my mind was little boy nervous boots playing with blocks in spelling soup wondering if I could make a word you would ware as a necklace when you threw toys to your dogs and called them your good good boys _____________ logography by daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"when the fawn of your eye sides was quiet enough to smile sand songs" wow, love that part... |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
*grin* Enjoyed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' you can make any kind of word you like I have seen them |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and the parking lot of my mind was little boy nervous boots playing with blocks in spelling soup what great lines~~ as always~~ M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D I love this for many reasons. It's a wonderful work of writing. Thank you for making me smile at the picture you painted. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suesea, thanks babe for letting me show you words here ____________ bbgirl, thanks lady ______________ ladyone, thanks to you lady friend for being a eye place _____________ MMs, thanks for the smile sides _______________ ms az, thank you babe for walking by |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
was quiet enough to smile sand songs.... love these lines Mr Daark RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B thank you |
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