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Whisper Wrap |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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This is the place where our roads meet in the twilight of our nights It is here that I feel safe enough to lean back into the arms that cradle me in gentle, soft sway of whispers wrapping around fingertips entwined; binding heart to heart in soul touch as the breath of dreams is lost in sigh. What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us. Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-29-2007 09:22 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The breath of your words, just lost ME in sigh! Gorgeous poem ~ and new pic! You both look fabulous!  Have a great day, Donna! Love to you and a smooch for your pooch! Linda  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks sweetie. This little guy isn't mine but I sure wish he was. You have a great day too, Lil Angel. after a fall I get back up, |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"This is the place where our roads meet in the twilight of our nights" Most Lovely, Donna. I have seen this place. I believe it is in the Shadow of the Moon. MoonShadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
aahh Gentle Kenneth...  Thank you for being here this morning. after a fall I get back up, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like a special place...James |
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teddymarvelle Junior Member
since 2007-08-26
Posts 47california usa |
wow beautiful and deep.. not often found... thank you ... loved it |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna these words entrance me "It is here that I feel safe enough to lean back into the arms that cradle me in gentle, soft sway of whispers wrapping around" |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Yes this is a wonderful place. I know it well. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a gorgeous write, Donna!  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most pleasant and fine Romantic 'write'! serious applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Most beautiful, lovely lady. I got caught up in the whisper. A |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yes indeed it is a lovely piece I am the little cracked mirror |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"as the breath of dreams is lost in sigh." Nice. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Your own words seem more like soft whispers Thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lost in sigh breathlessly lovely....... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for the kindness of your comments. I wish I could hug ya'll. after a fall I get back up, |
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