Open Poetry #41 |
Today, I Thought |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Today I thought Love was here, But its seems like yesterday, Today, I thought it was a day, To spend a time with you, Today, Finding my way back to you, Today, I thought Love was here with me, But then I thought it's over now, Love was gone away, When the wind came and Love wouldn't stay the same, Today, I thought love was holding On to the time, Today, I thought..... Today, I thought, It will stay like this... Today I thought was a day, To my love, Today, I thought It will never be the one Today, I thought It will be ours, Today, I thought I was the one Today I thought, I was loving you, Today ,I thought it was all over, Today , I thought..... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
there are many.... conflicting thoughts within a day..or in some series of days...and often.we think too much..and forget..to live... enjoyed this... for what it made me think..for what it brought to mind as I paused.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I tend to think this way sometimes... I prefer the days when my thoughts and my heart are focused...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Someone once told me to stop thinking so much~~ M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I smiled when I read nakedthoughts comment because I was thinking practically the same thing after reading your poem. Quit thinking and live your life! Enjoyed the read. .....jo |
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