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vandana
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0 posted 2007-08-10 11:55 AM



Today I thought
Love was here,
But its seems like yesterday,
Today, I thought it was a day,
To spend a time with you,
Today, Finding my way back to you,
Today, I thought
Love was here with me,
But then
I thought it's over now,
Love was gone away,
When the wind came and
Love wouldn't stay the same,
Today, I thought love was holding
On to the time,
Today, I thought.....
Today, I thought,
It will stay like this...
Today I thought was a day,
To my love,
Today, I thought
It will never be the one
Today, I thought
It will be ours,
Today, I thought
I was the one
Today I thought,
I was loving you,
Today ,I thought it was all over,
Today , I thought.....

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2007-08-10 04:54 PM


there are many.... conflicting thoughts within a day..or in some series of days...and often.we think too much..and forget..to live...

enjoyed this... for what it made me think..for what it brought to mind as I paused....


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-08-10 05:05 PM


I tend to think this way sometimes...
I prefer the days when my thoughts and my heart are focused...James

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2007-08-10 07:05 PM


Someone once told me to stop thinking so  much~~

M

iliana
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4 posted 2007-08-11 12:30 PM


I smiled when I read nakedthoughts comment because I was thinking practically the same thing after reading your poem.  Quit thinking and live your life!  Enjoyed the read.   .....jo
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