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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-08-28 12:45 PM



Stop Thief


you have taken something
calling it yours
but what it is I have
forever endures
you lack so much
that you have to take
a coward and a cheat
was your first mistake
I belong to a family
yes a proud member
you have lit a match
in us an undying ember
when you touched one
of us it’s felt by the rest
the ink that flows through
us is one heart possessed
there is much love between
us it need not be spoken
strength between even the
weakest link so nothing broken
you can run and go hide
but you know what you are
a liar wears a bright tattoo
upon his skin a moral scar
you have hurt the ones
of my blood in act of betray
but remember it is true every dog
and jackal will have it’s day


© Copyright 2007 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-08-28 12:57 PM


Amen....you go gal     Love this heart felt and powerful write!  It's a shame, what some people will do.
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2 posted 2007-08-28 12:57 PM




HopeS
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3 posted 2007-08-28 01:18 PM


They will get their cumuppence in the end

Hope

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-08-28 11:17 PM




a mindful work Helen!


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-28 11:20 PM


Lots of emotions in this one...James
aziza
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6 posted 2007-08-29 01:51 AM


Well written
Well said

A

vandana
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7 posted 2007-08-29 12:25 PM


enjoyed
SmartChick
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8 posted 2007-08-29 02:44 PM


You've got that right!
Magnus
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9 posted 2007-08-29 02:52 PM


Excellent, way to go Helen....says a lot
regarding our latest chain of events.

suthern
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10 posted 2007-08-29 03:34 PM


Beautiful response to an ugly situation... You get 'em, gal! *S*
MoonShadow
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11 posted 2007-08-29 03:47 PM


Once said for all... well said.

          MoonShadow
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