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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I am enigma the purest of fantasy the core, the center of every mans dream; I know the secrets to each woman’s desires I am cold as ice yet burn with fire. I can be completely frustrating on the verge of complication. In the same breath spoken, as gentle I too, can be total domination. I am lady I am friend I say my prayers I curse like men I am afraid of nothing but not always am I strong I rage like the storm I am autumn’s song I am bold sometimes I am shy I'll leave you in love left only with why's. I am both desired and hated by men I am mystery I am, woman. each time makes me stronger...but after the fall.... we get back up and move on, because the past is the past and there is no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on...~dmsmith~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah now you see.... the mysery of women is that they are like water..like rivers... there is always a danger yet there is also always a pleasure.. one can find a deep quiet inside themselves, when they pause... very nicely done ma'am |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very comtimplative analogy that you serve up in that statement sir, and one that I can certainly give considerable thought to. Even the river, though strong and steady can be depleted at times too. Most certainly indeed there are times when standing still that a peace is found... good morning sir, and thank you for stopping in. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well women have been compared to many things... none of which truly do them justice ma'am.... and it is from the stillness inside...we can see enough of the enigmas sometimes to at least slightly grasp an understanding... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...oh...I know that I myself have been compared to many things.. some good perhaps, some bad but regardless, I am always still just me, comfortable in this skin I'm in regardless of what anyone else might ever think.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This ‘write’ is most fine!: I am especially fond of: “I am enigma the purest of fantasy the core, the center of every mans dream”; “I am autumn’s song”; AND, the ending: “I am both desired and hated by men I am mystery I am, woman(!)” Serious, sustained applause!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Strong and captivating... demands respect of substance and form well said, Milady, well said. MoonShadow . |
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teddymarvelle Junior Member
since 2007-08-26
Posts 47california usa |
yes you are!! will you marry me? .. lol |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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