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Margherita
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0 posted 2007-08-26 03:40 PM






You are so beautiful

You are so beautiful,
untouched by decadence
you walk on splitters of broken glass
you move through the chaos
of downtown dusty roads
and crusted house walls
shouting at you in agony.

You are so beautiful,
while your feet touch the debris
of discouraging social failures,
while your eyes move beyond
the horror visions induced
by carelessness and ignorance,
to call upon the purity
always available within your soul.

You are so beautiful,
strong and loving,
while you open your heart
in midst of bitter tears
falling from hopeless eyes
blurring the world's brightest skies.
You are the sun piercing boldly
through the miasma of injustice.

You are so beautiful,
as if born anew every instant.
Unaffected by the passing of time.
You are a rare flower
blooming in brilliant colors
in midst of desolation.
I look up to you and I am healed.

And now your beauty spreads
over the wounds of this Earth
conquering the shadows
and bringing back the light
into sightless eyes.
People will raise their heads
and they will rediscover
the wonderment of creation.
You are so beautiful!
... and I walk with you.


© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 2007-08-26 04:00 PM


Marherita - and your words too are so beautiful.  They will "ring" in my head as I proceed to bed and then the angels will take over.  I'm presently reading about angels.  Lovely poem - thank you!
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2007-08-26 04:01 PM


if only we could all become flowerchildren

this is beautiful

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-26 04:06 PM


Fabulous...James
The Lady
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4 posted 2007-08-26 09:02 PM




"You are so beautiful!
... and I walk with you."

a lot of love in this Margherita
beautifully done!

JL
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5 posted 2007-08-26 09:10 PM


"People will raise their heads
and they will rediscover
the wonderment of creation.
You are so beautiful!
... and I walk with you."

Beautiful poetry.

JL


Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

MoonShadow
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6 posted 2007-08-27 03:31 PM



   Lovely... nicely done.

         MoonShadow
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Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2007-08-27 05:49 PM


This was certainly inspired by a muse of spiritual depth and wondrous images.
You are a very talented writer
Liz

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-08-28 12:27 PM


Marvelous Margherita, both your pen and soul "are so beautiful".

I marvel at your talent, grace ~ and spirit.

Love 2 U,
Linda

Margherita
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9 posted 2007-08-29 12:01 PM


Thank you all my dear poet friends for your generous comments.
Have a great inspiring day!
Love,
Margherita

SouthernJustice
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10 posted 2007-12-18 07:11 PM


This poem is so beautiful. GOd Bless. AND TY 4 the kind word on the Christmas Poem, "SJ"
lucky
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11 posted 2007-12-19 12:48 PM


beautiful indeed..!

dale

aziza
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12 posted 2007-12-19 01:07 AM


Such a beautiful gift that you offer us.  You are so beautiful.

xoxoxo
Love and Merry Christmas,
Alison

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13 posted 2007-12-19 01:13 AM


Hopefully your words will ring true and people will rediscover the beauty in walking with him.  Lovely Margherita, just lovely.

             
Love, Joy, and Cheer!

GG
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14 posted 2007-12-19 07:54 AM


I just want to shout 'yes!' after reading this.
It sticks.
Definitely beautiful.


~alyssa

Hupomeno.

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-12-19 08:38 AM


Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

Kahlil
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16 posted 2007-12-19 09:02 AM


Wow, this is a masterpiece, dear Margherita!
And SJ has brought it back in such a timely manner, it's perfect for the Christmas season.
Beautiful, just like your heart!

Klassy Lassy
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17 posted 2007-12-19 02:17 PM


Beautiful insights and affirmations of a gentle heart for ONE obviously loved.... so glad you shared!  ~ Klassy
Margherita
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18 posted 2007-12-19 06:24 PM


thank you dear SouthernJustice for appreciating this one and bringing it back to the top ...

I am so happy to see your very loving replies, dear Pip friends. Thanks to each of you.

Love,
Margherita


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